Because Making The Second “One Small Step” Is Greater Than Any Dance Step

Recently I read an online article regarding Buzz Aldrin’s personal life, and I would like to clarify something for the person who wrote it:

Buzz Aldrin did indeed appear on Dancing With The Stars, but there was no need to make that part of your description of him in your headline and your introductory paragraph.  Trust me when I say that Buzz Aldrin being the second human ever to walk on the moon is a way cooler lead in, and the fact he was on Dancing With The Stars is the tidbit that deserved to be tucked away halfway through the article.

Funny thing is . . . as I write this now, I see somebody else agrees with me, because I see your article has been re-written since I bookmarked it yesterday.

This makes me happy.


%d bloggers like this: